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i tinkered with the word balloons in the last panel, what do you guys think about this? i think this is much less confusing. it's not perfect, i should have just designed the panel differently from the get-go, but i think it's way better. i hope there's still time to get it into the finished printed book! keep your fingers crossed!
looking back on pages always brings "what was i thinking? why did i think THAT was the best choice?" moments for me.
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I read it completely backwards in the previous version, apparently... So, yeah, this is better.
ReplyDeleteYep, better!
ReplyDeleteThe speech bubble tail doesn't really distract from the image; this looks great.
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